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Timeline:
0:00 Intro
0:15 Offering Small Stakes
1:42 Starting in the Wrong Place
3:00 Expected Emotional Reactions
4:45 Conflict Without Consequences
5:24 Ignoring Narrative Binoculars
6:28 Too Early Solutions
7:35 Using False Suspense
9:43 Not Coming Up with a Good Pitch
10:50 Over-Explaining Everything to Readers